Thanks for the feedback! I got the same response from my friends regarding demo 1 and the soundtrack feel. One of my friends was thinking about putting a guitar track to it. He also talked about lyrics. I'm interested in how the dynamics would change. I think I know what you're saying about the piano. When I tried taking some of it out, the song seemed too light- like the synth stuff wasn't carrying enough weight on it's own. I figured I'd go with it for now. I'm sure I could do better with transitions between parts too. I think I suffer from Musical Attention Deficit Disorder. After 4-8 measures, the music's got to do something different :p My preference is more band-oriented. That's what I was going after with demo 1. Thanks again!! Mike --- In xl7@yahoogroups.com, José Sáez <taliesin@t...> wrote: > Demo 1 is pretty organic. It sounds like a TV soundtrack of some sort... Has a certain "band" feeling... doesn't sound like coming from one piece of kit only. Criticisms: the piano is too "in yer face" for me. > > Demo 2 sounds like early Depeche Mode. Again, i feel that the piano is too much all over the place (perhaps the piano lesson had made you to not notice that :) ). > > Over all i like the structure of the songs. We are too used to 8 bar loops that evolve forever, and these sound like you could sing over them. > > Jose > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: mike > To: xl7@yahoogroups.com > Sent: Wednesday, April 27, 2005 12:42 PM > Subject: [xl7] A couple of new tunes... > > > > I put them in my yahoo briefcase if anyone's interested in listening. They're in the New > Stuff folder within the Music folder. Here's the address: > > http://f1.pg.briefcase.yahoo.com/mikedancy > > I'm too lazy to give them names- just demo 1 and demo 2. They're both all emu (px7) > recorded straight into my cd burner (going through mixer and eq first) > > I've been taking piano lessons for six months now. A few more years and maybe I'll be > able to write using chords :p > > Mike > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- -- > Yahoo! Groups Links > > a.. To visit your group on the web, go to: > http://groups.yahoo.com/group/xl7/ > > b.. To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: > xl7-unsubscribe@yahoogroups.com > > c.. Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to the Yahoo! Terms of Service. > > > > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
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Re: A couple of new tunes...
2005-04-27 by mike
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