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Subject: proofreading page 1

From: "Dave Bradley" <daveb2@...>
Date: 2001-01-08

2nd paragraph:
"New modules are always in de sign" remove the space..

Under general specs or somewhere you need to tout that this is a large
format panel synth, not cramped!

MOTM-101:

White, pink, and slow random OUTPUTS. Unique vibrato OUTPUT
The 101 has panel dimensions in units, the others don't
Both AC and ???? cut off!

MOTM-120

Hyphenate as sub-octaves instead of suboc-taves
and the individual suboctaves are ??? cut off

MOTM-300
has linear AND exp FM, you just mention linear
did you mention the 4 waveforms available? text is cut off after
"new timbral possibilities with audio-"

Dave Bradley
Principal Software Engineer
Engineering Animation, Inc.
daveb@...