In the 420, first bullet, I think you need another comma after the "and":
"LP, HP, and Notch responces".
In the 900 section, first bullet, what is "(typ)"? Do you mean "typical"?
If so, spell it out! At first, I thought you might have meant "type".
Again, I was not an english major!
--PBr
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> have corrected Page 2 and uploaded the back cover (not much going on
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> Note I switched to Acrobat 4. If you can't read the files, get the free
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> Paul S.
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