In general specifications, "sophisticaed" is missing a "t".
In the 101, on the first bullet, there should be another comma between
"pink" and "and": "White, pink, and slow random". Also, on the third
bullet, it looks like there's a space between "low" and "-droop".
In the 110, the first bullet also looks like it has an extra space between
"Low" and "-noise". Might just be the font... It looks a little odd,
however, that you have the dimentions as a specific bullet on the 110. In
the description, you want to say "...level controls and >>an<< UNBALANCE
function...". Use "an" instead of "a", because you're preceeding a word
beginning with a vowel.
In the 300 description, did you mean to say "cermet"? I'm just not familiar
with the word, but I thought I've heard it in the description before.
In the 320 description, I think there should be a comma after the "and" in
the second sentence: "Sine, triangle, ramp, and pulse outputs...".
Further, in the second bullet, it seems that it would be better to put the
"1V/Oct responce" in the general section, since that's common.
NOTE: I was not an english major!
--PBr
> -----Original Message-----
> From:Paul Schreiber [SMTP:synth1@...]
> Sent:Sunday, January 07, 2001 11:53 PM
> To:motm@egroups.com
> Subject:Re: [motm] Page #1 is up (crap)
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> The font substitution Adode used caused some of the spacing to screw up.
> This is NOT on the real
> master files. Just check for content, ignore formatting errors.
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> I hate computers.
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> Paul S.
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