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Also...


The bullet points are generally capitalized, but the "low" under the 420 and
440 are not. Also some points under the 910.


-----Original Message-----
From: imorpheusl@...
To: motm@egroups.com
Sent: 01/07/2001 8:44 PM
Subject: Re: [motm] Please proofread this!

minor errors:

-the MOTM410 description has a wording error (I think): When the same
old.......the MOTM 410 makes your track stand out. I think it should be
"the
MOTM 410 will make your track stand out" (this is just a wording
thing...I
think I'm right)

-the dimensions on the motm 700 bullet list (bullet #7) is one space to
the
right of the bullet, but none of the other model descriptions are
like
this

- I belive "useage" on the 800 description should be spelled usage
(bullet #6)

- the motm 910's description has an error: "1in" should be "1 in"
(bullet #2)

-Chaz
[morpheus]



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