Archive of the former Yahoo!Groups mailing list: MOTM
Subject: Re: [motm] Please proofread this!
From: imorpheusl@...
Date: 2001-01-08
minor errors:
-the MOTM410 description has a wording error (I think): When the same
old.......the MOTM 410 makes your track stand out. I think it should be "the
MOTM 410 will make your track stand out" (this is just a wording thing...I
think I'm right)
-the dimensions on the motm 700 bullet list (bullet #7) is one space to the
right of the bullet, but none of the other model descriptions are like
this
- I belive "useage" on the 800 description should be spelled usage (bullet #6)
- the motm 910's description has an error: "1in" should be "1 in" (bullet #2)
-Chaz
[morpheus]