You have some nice tracks. My favourite is Prance! Jarre meets New Order meets Erasure meets euro disco pop :) /Tristan On Sat, Mar 20th, 2010 at 7:00 AM, Daniel Baum <daniel@...> wrote: > Thanks! > > I did some more editing to the vocals in Imaginary Friend today, so > feel free listen if you like. > > As to my other work; there are another 13 recordings on my site that > you are quite welcome to listen to. To get somewhat back on topic, > one of them, called "Song of the Sampler" was entirely recorded on my > Emax II. > > As for the future, I'm working on it. . . > > Regards, > > D. > > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: Patrick R > To: emax@yahoogroups.com > Sent: Thursday, March 18, 2010 8:28 AM > Subject: Re: [emax] Imaginary Friend - my latest song > > > > Hey Daniel, > > Yea, I was completely joking about the auto-tune shit. I hear a new > song with that effect everytime I turn on the radio. > > I get what you are trying to do lyrically now and it makes sense. > It is somewhat like Wrong in its repetition. > > Anyway I look forward to your next song/album! > > -patrick > > ________________________________ > From: Daniel Baum <daniel@...> > To: emax@yahoogroups.com > Sent: Thu, March 11, 2010 1:13:01 PM > Subject: Re: [emax] Imaginary Friend - my latest song > > > Hi Patrick, > > First of all, apologies for taking a long time to reply to your > post. Also, > thanks for taking the time to listen to my song and producing such > a > comprehensive list of suggestions. > > >First, major applause for completing something you feel happy > enough with > >to put out there. Second any >crtisims should be taken as trying > to help. > >And keep in mind I feel this is better than most the shit that is > on >the > >charts right now. But speaking of the charts, maybe you should add > some > >auto-tune effect on your >voice. I'm sure you would chart right > now. . . > > Thanks! I'm pretty sure you were joking about this, but I went > ahead and did > it anyway. I used Reaper's own built-in autotune effect. It is not > too > dominant, and I think it does actually sound marginally better. > > I'd be very happy to hear what you think of the result: > > http://alonetone. com/danielb/ tracks/imaginary -friend > > >What are you going for with the track? What place, what atmosphere > do you > >want me to be in, or what >feeling do you have or want to envoke > from the > >song? > > I wanted it to sound kind of dark and forbidding. I probably > shouldn't > mention Depeche Mode yet again in connection with this song, but it > will > give you the general idea The actual inspiration for the basic > sound came > from an Emulator II demo I found on Youtube. That said, all of the > sounds > except the drums and the JX-8p pad that I used behind the > repetition of the > first verse are homemade. > > Just some thoughts: > > Structure: > > > The ending around >3:40-3:43 actually would sound really great at > the end > > of your bridge before droping >right back into the chorus. > > The flanging sound (actually Roland JX-8p oscillator sync, there's > no > flanger used), overlaid with the "filter sweep" DX7 sound, actually > does > recur in empty spaces throughout the track. At the place you > mention, it's > shortened. > > Lyrics: > > >It is my feeling that I'm being beat over the head with my > "imginary > >friend". > > That's kind of the point. People like the one the song describes > can be > rather obsessive and talk about their imaginary friends > incessantly. > > >Effects: > > >The bass could use some glissandro or a slight susstain to round > off the > >edges just slightly. > > Interesting idea. Might not be too easy to achieve on an Emax II. > Pitch > envelope anyone? > > >Also, have you tried raising the bass an octave higher? > > I think it would sound rather plinky. > > >It sounds really low without the punch and this sometimes occurs > on bass > >samples that are being played too >low. Some EQ on the bass could > make it > >fill out a little also, > > It's not really a bass sample. it's a sample of me saying "taa" > into my Korg > Radias's vocoder. I did give it some extra EQ. > > >or layer a real bass sound in there. > > Don't have one, can't play it. > > >It made me think of Body Pop and a bit Joy Division so I think it > is in > >line with exactly what you were going >for. Keep it up! > > Thanks again for your criticism. I certainly didn't find it to be > negative, > and frqankly, even if it was, I normally find negative criticism to > be more > useful than everybody standing in the aisles and cheering. . . > > Regards, > > Daniel > > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed] > > > > > > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed] > >
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Re: [emax] Imaginary Friend - my latest song
2010-03-20 by tu@...
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