> in the blanks.... you know what I mean.
Yes it really could be more. The B motif really is crying out for a
pad (chords) behind it. The implied harmony is quite strong if it was
made explicit, but it doesn't really come through. And the Bach-ish
section could use some high hats and drum kicks ....
I think I am going to work on this one a little more. For now I'll
try to stay monophonic (true to the orginal intent) but write a
little more explicitly. Thanks for the help.
Cheers,
Jerry