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Subject: RE: [newmellotrongroup] Essay assigned

From: "John Wright" <john.wright@consona.com>
Date: 2010-02-17

Coda - What font did you use and are your margins OK?
 
Lots of ELP stuff lately.  Just learned that Emerson and Lake will be touring in the Spring and they're coming to Indianapolis.  A rare occurrence; we usually have to drive to Cincinnati or Chicago to see Prog.
 
John

From: newmellotrongroup@yahoogroups.com [mailto:newmellotrongroup@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Mike Dickson
Sent: Wednesday, February 17, 2010 2:16 AM
To: newmellotrongroup@yahoogroups.com
Subject: Re: [newmellotrongroup] Essay assigned, did it on prog rock, correct my factual errors.

 

1st impression - at 3198 words you've slightly overshot the 1000 word limit.
2nd impression - you have no references, quotes or sources.
3rd impression - since when was an essay only 1000 words long?

Mike